Too much confusion in life
going helter skelter in life..
Seeing your dream crumble in front of your eyes.
What more pathetic than this plight,
is the hope of rebuilding the dream from ashes
Nothing can be much worse than this right!
A very poor ending to a highly emotion strung poem.. Yes as you can recognize it easily, this is my first ever brush with the poetic dimensions of creative writing ,remaining aloof or rather ignorant of this beautiful form of expressing yourself in lieu of the supposed phobia that i am 'POETICALLY CHALLENGED' never gave me any inclination nor the enouragement to foray into this stream. But today i just opened the New Post page.. took hold of my digital pen [ keyboard] and started writing away and words flew out.. a very poor attempt.. but who cares i am not looking for an A+ or a star on my sheet!!
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Even though u r not expecting A+ or stars on your poetic flair, believe me you certainly deserve a huge clap and ur effort is commendable. You have cracked the barrier and you are no longer POETICALLY CHALLENGED…….thumbs up! ….and hope u will nurture your budding craze with positive attitude and add more feathers to your writing skills to fly high in the world of creativity.
Thanks Sharon for those lovely words of encouragement.. honestly, i have been dying to hear constructive criticism in some creative words.. and u finally gave me dat..lolz..anywayz will try to keep the doors open for this new medium though i don't know how fruitful it might prove..u keep urself updated on any new happenings on the blog..even after u leave me fending alone in the murkier water of Midas..lolz
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